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Thursday 12 March 2020

The Young Detective

Today we had to do a narrative writing called "Young detective".The story was started by Mrs Moala who wrote in the blue ink.The story was about how Adam lost a precious key and now he needs to find it before they come.My story is not finished yet so I hope you can enjoy a part of it.

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It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!


He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.

Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.

Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.

Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate..

When he looked at the table he found a green-ish key but he didn’t know what to do with it.Adam had the key just in-case he needed it for anything.So he randomly found a door with the exact same color as the key.

When he unlocked the door his father was sitting down on a couch.The place he stumbled into was a library. He looked around but didn’t find anything.

When Adam was about to leave he found an object which stood out to him the most.His father was leaving the mysterious library and Adam got closer to the object but it was just a book.

Indeed he was a bit disappointed but he tried to stay calm.Adam grabbed the  book.Quickly ran away he thought it would be a good idea to look for the precious key then read the book.




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