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Thursday 18 June 2020

Narrative Writing (Choose It) 1/7

(Warning:The village is completely abandoned and the village is real.The mansion is very scary and it’s real.The mansion’s  story is completely real!)

One day there lived a girl named “Lotus”.Lotus lived in a very small but friendly village called “Inunaki Village”.This village has a very bad/terrifying past.Here’s the story,once there lived a small girl named “Rose”.Rose is friendly to everyone who used to live there.

But one day she accidentally fell into a pond which was very deep.No one could save her so she had a sad death.The villagers were mourning over her death.Around 12:30am a villager grabbed a weapon or at least something to attack the villagers.

Some nights she would hear noises coming from the small villages.Once she even heard a scream which crept her out the most.But she even saw an apparition of a male with a knife or axe.

Once that villager grabbed that sincere weapon they snuck inside other people’s small house and started to hurt them with it.The most important thing she didn’t know was that the villagers who usually look after her are actually the spirits of the scene which happened before.

Everyday she would go by the pond and get to see a small girl who was once known as Rose.Lotus was scared but it turned out to be her reflection which was weird since she actually saw a small girl before.

Lotus soon ran back to the village and she was so scared so she never looked back.Her parents were confused but as soon as Lotus described the girl’s facial features they went silent.They walked towards Lotus and grabbed her.Her father threw her outside which nearly killed poor Lotus.A male villager walked towards her and took her with him.

Lotus was screaming & crying since she was injured.The male villager immediately covered her with a blindfold and tried to keep her warm throughout the journey.As soon as they arrived at their destination Lotus kept quiet.The villager took off her blindfold and held her hand to keep her safe.

3 comments:

  1. hi farah wow good writing you got there keep it up and keep being what you are

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    1. Thanks for your response/review for my writing!

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