The Staircase (Narrative Writing)

Today we had to do a writing test.I was kinda shaking since I didn't know what to do but then I thought of doing something like this.

There were 4 girls (Lisa,Minnie,Joy & Sana).These girls were sweet to others.On 14,Jan 2000 (5:30 PM) Joy was casually walking in a forest but then she realised something was wrong.Out of nowhere she got frightened.There was someone following her but lucky the 3 girls were with her.”Girls,some is following us!” “How are you so sure?” said Lisa.

Sana was confused but she was the bravest one there.Minnie turned around to see no one was there.Joy suddenly passed out while someone was laughing. “Who is there?!” “Leave us alone!!!”. After a while the girls noticed that it was getting a bit dark.A little girl came out of nowhere and saw the 4 girls.

Lisa knew the girl was suspicious since she was wearing a red dress with dark red splattered all over her dress.Minnie & Sana both said “Why are you here little-” but they were cut off by Lisa whispering “guys,she is a ghost.She is the ghost who died from a doll who killed her and she wants to kill anyone who had spotted her or whoever talked to her”.

Joy was shocked.”How could a beautiful young girl be so scary?” Nobody other than Minnie believed Lisa even though Lisa was truly right.”The girl’s name is unknown but she was killed by a doll named Mary-san. Mary-san is truly deadly but that doll is in Japan only where we are”.

Sana was so upset.”he-he,HAHAHA!!!” The girl was laughing hysterically non-stop.The girls dashed their way out to realise their lost.The sky was deep black.When they looked at their watch…”It’s 12:00!!!” “We need to go home now!!” Minnie was too busy choosing to go up the mysterious stairs.

Lisa ran up the stairs leaving the girls shocked.The others also slowly went up… When they went up they all saw a cabin with other people in it.Most of them were the girl’s friends.Once they went inside a speaker suddenly said “1,2 1,2” everyone hid in places like under the bunk beds,in the forest outside and more.Lisa,Minnie,Sana & Joy ran and hid in the wardrobe.

The door burst open and Minnie looked through a small hole to realise the girl was back again! When she told the others they wanted to scream but Sana noticed that Mary (The girls name was found) was holding a knife behind her back.Mary was jumping on the beds and killing the girls one by one.

Joy was slowly getting sick and suddenly Mary opened the closet door… The girls were able to make it out alive but Joy immediately said “RUN!!!” and they saw another staircase so they went inside a house.Locked the door and when they turned on the lights… Sana said “where are we?” “are we inside our house since it’s been an hour getting away from a girl who looked innocent?” 

Lisa looked around and she knew they were back home but why was their house in a forest? They heard a knocking type of sound but luckily the windows and doors were completely shut and locked.When Minnie peered through the window she was nearly crying. Lisa straight away yelled out “Leave us alone!!! What did we ever do to you!!!” 

That’s when she knew she shouldn’t have done that.Joy grabbed a sharp weapon (preferably a knife) and slowly opened the door… Mary was about to stab them but Joy immediately stabbed the girl and they became safe.